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Sandy 21st March 2005 @ 02:13 pm (GMT +10)

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Wow...the first chapter was beautifully written! You write each of the characters in perfect voice...especially Spike and Illyria! I'm eager to read what happens next...

Btw, I really admire your balance of dialogue and descriptives so far...it's a fine balance, and you have it down pat! :o)


Sandy	21st March 2005 @ 02:13 pm (GMT +10)
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Wow...the first chapter was beautifully written! You write each of the characters in perfect voice...especially Spike and Illyria! I'm eager to read what happens next... Btw, I really admire your balance of dialogue and descriptives so far...it's a fine balance, and you have it down pat! :o)